这些示例展示编辑思路，不代表评测分数。对照原文、示范表达以及需要核对的信息。
每个示例都提供原稿、示意修改和核对重点。除了句子是否更简洁，还要检查行动主体、时间与承诺是否仍然符合原文。
下列示例均为本页编写的虚构编辑示范，用于说明修改思路，不代表实测结果。载入后会使用你的设置重新改写，并按实际请求计算用量。
原文
We would like to inform you that the review meeting has been rescheduled to 14 October at 10:00 a.m. Please provide your comments by 12 October so that we can prepare the final agenda.
示范改写
The review meeting is now on 14 October at 10:00 a.m. Please send your comments by 12 October so we can prepare the final agenda.
检查重点: 会议：10 月 14 日上午 10 点。反馈：10 月 12 日。请求仍是提交意见，而不是批准。
试试这段文本示例说明: 编辑示范 · 非产品实测输出
原文
The starter plan includes three projects and weekly exports. This provides users with the opportunity to manage a small portfolio in an efficient manner. It is important to note that additional projects require an upgraded plan.
示范改写
The starter plan includes three projects and weekly exports, making it useful for a small portfolio. You’ll need a higher plan to add more projects.
检查重点: 保留三个项目、每周导出和升级条件。这些是虚构产品的信息。
试试这段文本示例说明: 编辑示范 · 非产品实测输出
原文
I am writing to follow up on the estimate of $480 that I sent on Monday. I would appreciate it if you could let me know whether you would like to proceed. Please note that work will only begin after your approval.
示范改写
I’m following up on the $480 estimate I sent on Monday. Would you like to go ahead? I’ll wait for your approval before starting work.
检查重点: 480 美元仍是估算金额，获得批准后才开始工作。不要把两点变成保证。
试试这段文本示例说明: 编辑示范 · 非产品实测输出
原文
This shelf has been designed for indoor use and supports a maximum load of 2 kg. It is important to be aware that the power adapter is not included with the product.
示范改写
This shelf is for indoor use and supports up to 2 kg. The power adapter is not included.
检查重点: 2 千克上限、仅限室内使用、未附适配器都应保留。
试试这段文本示例说明: 编辑示范 · 非产品实测输出
原文
In order to restart the device, first disconnect it from the power supply. You should then wait for a period of 30 seconds before reconnecting it. If the light remains red, please contact support.
示范改写
To restart the device, disconnect it from the power supply, wait 30 seconds, and reconnect it. If the light stays red, contact support.
检查重点: 先断开连接，等待 30 秒，再重新连接。最后一步仍需保留执行条件。
试试这段文本示例说明: 编辑示范 · 非产品实测输出
原文
We are currently aiming to release the update on 8 November. However, it is important to note that this date depends on the remaining tests. We will provide confirmation once testing has been completed.
示范改写
We’re aiming to release the update on 8 November, depending on the remaining tests. We’ll confirm the date once testing is complete.
检查重点: 日期是目标，不是承诺。测试和确认仍未完成。
试试这段文本示例说明: 编辑示范 · 非产品实测输出
