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I am writing to follow up on the estimate of $480 that I sent on Monday. I would appreciate it if you could let me know whether you would like to proceed. Please note that work will only begin after your approval.
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I’m following up on the $480 estimate I sent on Monday. Would you like to go ahead? I’ll wait for your approval before starting work.
检查重点: 480 美元仍是估算金额,获得批准后才开始工作。不要把两点变成保证。
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